then came crashing the unearthly
thunder
as we squeeze in under
the shelter
we watch the racing rain poor down
listen to the terrible
thunder pound
louder and louder each
time
and wait to know our fate
all running
to the buses
through the draining rain
I wasn’t relieved at that lame time
We weren’t very happy
Waiting for the bus
soaking wet
That is when I was
relieved
relieved that I didn’t
have to run a 5k in the hot Florida forecast
This poem was arranged from a stream of conscience task. In my first writing i talked about xcountry and how i didnt like it. I always included my Disney try with the xcountry team in the writing task too. So i pulled my favorite lines from my writing task and formed them into a poem. My main topic in this poem is florida and our adventure on race day. In this arranged poem i used alliteration and assonance, mostly alitteration because it's easy. I decided to write about this because it was right after we had got back from Disney and the xcountry season was almost over, so i had xcountry on the brain.
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